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Structure
by Brent Iwanski, 16

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The old structure was standing silently. Obviously, it was a two-story house, with a pointed roof, but it was believed to be empty. None of the townspeople thought it could be inhabited, because all could see that the house was dilapidated. Every window was broken, every door was hanging by merely one hinge, and the gaps in the wooden boards let the sunlight through, as the grin of an old man missing several teeth.

From the street, the gauntlet to the front door was an adventure which was hidden in the dares of the town's children. The tangled masses of vines and thorn bushes would rip through even the toughest jeans, and leave the intruder bleeding on the obscured cement path. Pieces of glass would crunch underfoot, piercing rugged boots of all who attempted to pass. But, if a brave soul made the desperate run to the front porch safely, he would find the passage that presented itself to be quite a contrast.

The front door's lock and latch were broken! The front door flapped in the brisk breeze, like the last autumn leaves that clung desperately to the bare bones of nearby oak trees.

Once inside, the perpetrator found himself in a narrow hallway, dark and dank, lined with pictures that told of past inhabitants. The faces were not those of happy individuals. They were solemn and morbid. One frame was hanging askew, the glass broken, the photograph missing. Those people must have led miserable lives. The energy left behind seemed to ooze from the cracks in the walls of the old house. What kind of people had lived here? What made them leave? Why had no one else ever moved in?

These unanswerable questions made me feel lonely, as if I were the missing picture from that empty frame.



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