Make it Write

Poems
by Dave, age 14

 dissterbd.

compilation of mast-r-works by ?

 

suppressing the opposite inside

"Freedom is the prevarication of one?s inner self
following the suppression of the opposite inside. "

often when I talk
I am not sure I am really talking.
often when I think,
I am not sure I am really thinking.
this plague of my inner self
dares to control my life
yet I cannot control my thoughts
and I refuse to let it take over.
I do not know why this
opposite inside is present,
nor am I powerful enough to find out.
it turns my life inside out
so that I no longer know
what I inquire,
and I no longer feel
what I fear.
the opposite inside
is not the composite outside
since thoughtful expression
is illegal
and
negligent suppression
is the law of everyday life.
my opposite inside
can no longer express but has to suppress,
can no longer think, but has to ignore,
can no longer show, but has to hide.

is that the beauty of life?
suppression on demand
expression on relinquishment?

NO!
one?s true beauty is one?s inner self.
But?
what if that inner self is independent?
what if that inner self desires freedom?
what if that inner self is exactly what nobody wants?

who are you
to question the values
of self prevarication and mendacity,
when you know that
individual choices are irrelevant
and the Mutual Mentality
is responsible for
the suppression of the opposite inside?

one does not seek the truth: the opposite inside,
one desires the lies: the composite outside
and the equivocation is more prominent
than veracity and honesty towards oneself
as well as others.
"That, my friend, is true Freedom!"

li(f)e.

a flicker of light
a moment so frivolous and insignificant
one may fail to see its value
to the eternity of the soul

a momentous spark of vision
I am alive
so what?
another individual occupant
of the edifice

then nothing
blurred vision hinders me to
see the past while experiencing
the future.
I do not know why and I am not prepared
to question this philosophy

the abstinence of my soul
complete and tranquil innocence
never experienced
of course there is always a first time

born without legs infelicitously
suddenly a gift.
simple yet adequate
for future experiences

castigated and scolded
crying yelling screwing or screaming
keeping everyone up all night
my voice, or rather tones,
that so annoyingly manage to
protrude everyone?s ignorance so eloquently

evolution.
my voice my thoughts my expressions
I have learned now.
yet appropriateness is still being questioned
and I still have not learned this art
of discretion of my thoughts.

school.
why? aren't I perfect?
how can I be possibly improved upon?
this useless edification with which
I am forced to live with and acknowledge
so bitterly and in vain.

the present
so confusing and agitating
still having knowledge forced
into my thick yet pregnable skull.

the future
is there one for me
or will I just end up toiling and working?
what the real truth behind this education
actually is:
slaving for the system that so
powerfully manages to control us all.

slaving till I die so eloquently
being placed in my very own grave
along with eternal peace of my mind and soul
exploring the tranquillity behind life.
perhaps.
of course.

The System 
  • another wholesome day
    in the institution
    the system controls me
    holds me back so exquisitely
    excoriate the system that so
    profoundly powerfully
    controls my actions thoughts desires
    • I cannot prove to myself
      that I am actually
      wholly
      in control
      of myself
      my inner self

    sitting there expressionless
    holding back my will to
    yawn from the previous
    night of slaving at the desk
    concentrating, yes concentrating
    instead of just relaxing so generously
    another double

    • Why am I being put through this
      constant tormenting of my soul
      when all I desire is eternal freedom
      of my body and soul?

    how often have I heard this?
    I?ve lost count
    since this desire is present
    in all souls not preoccupied
    with the dementia of
    alcoholism

    • not the alcoholism that
      you may know, but
      alcoholism
      of energy lust and desideratum
      for the turmoil of pain
      sadomasochism-masochism
      that so generously fills us up
      with the continuity to work
  • attempting to look interested
    when all I want is a simple
    gift to humankind:
    eternal rest and relaxation
    of my soul that has endured
    the torment of the upper system,
    that has so wonderfully endured
    and managed to succeed
    • yes. I desire this element
      of my mental stability
      helping me in the succession
      of my soul.

    Homework. threethirty a.m.
    god no, not again!
    The remainder just
    a blur. a quick sketch of my
    temporarily uneventful life

    • concentrating focusing thinking
      wondering why I slaved through
      the night so eloquently and obediently
      when I could have ignored this
      code like so many companions
      and managed to succeed anyways

    the end. so short sudden
    a blast
    a stagger
    an uttering of freedom
    a split-second of peace
    until I finally manage to
    pass through and transfer

    • my soul to a better place
      when my brain already
      is in a liquid state
      and I am too wrinkled to
      experience happiness in my
      current state
  • Familiar Ignominy 
  • uncles were always heroes
    what about mine
    so narcissistic in every way
    awaiting his worshipping
    on behalf of others

    how disgusting can he be
    to order me to acknowledge
    the certain sense of unity
    his body experiences

    everything works together on this
    tainted evil which I refuse
    to partake in
    due to the endless amount
    of pain I have endured
    by watching him commit
    these savage acts

    acts that may appear usual to others
    but to me it is the torturing
    of the iconoclastic enterprise
    that dares to pester my hard working
    kind and giving uncle
    who so cleverly employs the souls
    of the lost to put his machine to work

    the machine of evil
    trying to pass of as
    an innovative dementia
    that is inaugurated in his work
    which so many admire
    in a sick and contorted way

    that I hate to see
    this ignominy
    this ignominy
    that pesters me!

    why am I filled with his
    dread in my veins
    in my veins that are so
    openly flaring pulsating breathing
    with the evils of his
    work

    • I am tortured
      I am sworn
      yet I have not experienced
      such ignorance on part
      of his mourn

      his sorrowful mourn for the death of death
      the birth of birth
      and the worshipping of Satan
      which he decides to judge
      pessimistically in a way
      that encourages me to think
      of his simplistic views
      and to challenge his ordeals as
      a man

      the machine
      have I told myself about it
      or am I suffering with the jealousy
      of a thousand pins in Lenin?s head
      which, I may tell you, cannot be judged
      so harshly

      as we all know that the machine
      that has crafted my uncle
      before my uncle crafted it
      may simply represent

      a porthole
      a porthole to the past
      the unforgiving past
      which I may so proudly point out
      can dissolve my uncle and retrieve my
      desire for this exquisite little
      piece of art
      or junk

      whichever I may prefer
      crafting the machine
      of my uncle?s sinister
      dementia of the soul.

    Awry Evening

  • crackling fire in the evening
    warm moist air in the
    hot summer time
    god I love this place!
    morocco.

    one more week until
    I will once more enjoy
    the unity of family
    but until then there?s
    only anguish for me

    sitting there, darkness
    settling over my apartment
    reading over the completed papers
    of my occupation that I
    have so gracefully constructed
    in the midst of worry and
    desperation.

    why this perturbation
    when I can enjoy the
    peaceful synthesis
    of my mind and soul
    without obstructing views
    interfering with this
    image of myself in harmony?

    one more week I tell you
    until my heart is satisfied
    and once more I am free to
    live without this worry
    this plague of my mind
    that has so curiously implanted
    itself in my brain causing me
    to experience this senility.

    I do not even know if I am missed
    or at least remembered
    will they remember?
    Why yes, I have always been so
    generous!
    have I really?
    leaving my son alone at night
    to go out and have fun over long
    periods.

    • will I be forgiven
      or will I be forced to exonerate
      them for this eternal antipathy
      I experience so benevolently
      towards this paranoia of the mentality

      one more week.
      yes I can endure
      but will I be sane, will I still love
      or will I be the heartless monster
      that I myself feared on those Friday
      nights smelling the liquor, hearing
      the loud music?

      this evening is so moist
      and hot in a comfortable way
      not too jarring for my soul
      this eternal peace
      or is it Styx?
      of my phlegmatic mentality.

 

dissterbd.                                                   1997: you-see-see

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excoriate
the system
we do not need it
what we need is a revolution,
yes revolution is desired by our society
that can no longer think due to the despair and misleading confusion
and yes, propaganda,
propaganda that has withdrawn our souls
from our bodies is a sick and demented nature
troubles us all for which the system is responsible.
utopia has us all withdrawn from society
and the relinquishment of everyday suffering.
we hate but can?t ignore
rivers of crimson constantly flowing from our severed wrists
and eternity and freedom
no restraints, boundaries
a nonanarchistic heaven protruded through our minds.
heaven of rebellious idealistic communists desiring freedom and equality
yet ignorance is present that cannot be extinguished dying with the body.
utopia won?t prove to be vexatious.
we don?t need the system that crafts these
constraints, this communism of our souls
that is so confusingly unequal and yet so precious
for the organization of our government.
I say excoriate the government, the eternal hell: the prison of our souls
pulling us back from our desired needs.
we do not need this hell we desire freedom
a certain sense of anarchy that leads to inner prosperity
soothing the red burning insides
that were caused by the constant rules, regulations, discipline, code
preventing ?harmful? interference with the wavelength of the government
it corresponds with Satan himself who some of us may worship and hate at the same time.
this confusion does not affect the brainwashed cultivated unaware
and yet so ironically enlightened projects of hell that do not understand the pain.
out we go into utopia, rivers of crimson draining from our so exquisitely empty bodies
filling the world with laughter understanding the monotonous nature and regulations
of the people above us and below god and yet so far away.
now they?re happy they do not wish to have us pretending to care
but yet secretly waiting, waiting for us to leave to our own world.
then we understand the consequences but its too late we have to live with that,
or rather die as our body is drained of our soul:
our blood
our rebelliousness
our anarchistic views
our iconoclastic nature
our so remarkably empty thoughts
robbed of our power our once-in-a-second
forever lasting scars on the illegal perfection the government has tricked us with.
we do not wish to leave the perfect plan of the government without these scars,
these scars that will make them remember that they do not have the power,
we do.
 
Proletarian Prophylactic TM

one does not need to know
why their money is being wasted
when one knows it is for a good
cause

that is why many people
question the sense of their money
being dragged away from their
fists so tightly clenched
by towers one may only look
up at

the downside would only
be the presentation of
society in a relinquished
state where they no longer stand
to have pride

but the government which
they had so cleverly selected
is here for a beneficiary cause
although that cause has not yet
been discovered

one questions the values of this
absolute thievery extortion and
corruption without first taking
into account the Styx that society
has built for itself.

you should not wish for the inevitable,
but rather take stand in this fight against
corruption and overpowerment.
the time is now and you will not
be able to have another chance

what do you do?
What Do You Do?
This is not an answerable
question since corruption
is not a solvable product
insurrectionary radical views
have now defeated our purpose
to prevention
and have been instituted in the society.

"Revolution is Now"

as many had said
the government cannot
be defeated; one cannot
defeat Satan who so cleverly
has society addicted to
this prominent economic
party not in a sense of joy
but rather in the harsh realization
of the continuation of the evils
in our society.

society is confused
the time is right
the government
must go

we shall not live in terror
and fear being forced
to pay for an unappreciable cause
and be imprisoned
for our rebellious
yet quite ordinary nature

do not allow this force
to control you
since you are submitting
yourself to
unnecessary control
over you entire life
as you may perish in the attempt
to recover once it is
Too Late.


dissterbd.                                                        1997: you-see-see



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